Statement of Intent feedback and learner response

Mark: 

Grade: 

Comments on Statement of Intent:

·        The concept works as a horror film but as a statement of intent you are a long way short of where you need to be. You are missing whole media concepts.
·         The whole statement is lacking organisation and quality – one paragraph, no sub-headings, missing capital letters etc.
·         Far more media terminology is required – look at the brief (minimum requirements) and then outline specific aspects you will create in your cross-media production that meets these requirements (e.g. you cover locations well but no specific shots etc.)
·         No reference to the film posters.
·         Nothing on audience or representation – this is basically just narrative description.
·         Tagline seriously lacks originality – can you not come up with something new?


3 points to focus on:
  • Ensure i include information on the 3 film posters 
  • Make sure to re-organise the structure in order to make sure i conform to the required layout 
  • Develop terminology and include audience and representations














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